Thank you so much for your heartfelt comment—it means the world to me! I'm so thrilled that Vivian’s story resonated with you on such an emotional level. I follow in the footsteps of Nietzsche when, in the 19th century, he declared to the world that, "I watch hentai for the plot," and knowing that her journey had you completely hooked really validates all the effort I put in!

As for what happens next… oh, the possibilities! But I can’t promise anything just yet. I'm still quite the novice at this whole game, and I need to get more experience under my belt to be able to make a worthy sequel to this tale. Don't worry though, somewhere down the line I will make one! Stay tuned for other videos like this one though! I want to once again thank you again for your amazing support!
Your affectionate friend,
Ambrosia

As the other Member said i felt so too its really hard to have a story like that with a narrative in the flesh despite i was trying to recreate the events or how it was the sex in my head the only thing that was in there was the feels and was preety hard to focus on something was not in there... I am a reviewer and despite i can't give you a review like the ones i like to do this JOI has A LOT and not for the sex just for the plot.

Things to take care in your next works: The story have really a lot of "ups and downs" she started saying she was really wild then when she figured it out she said she was not reaelly like that then at the end while the sex she again implys that the first "self" of her was real so it was pretty confusing for someone to asimilate whats the real Vivian in there. That thing happen the day before his weeding so i don't know how can you do something to change the current flow of the story its really "soon" and its quite hard to know how many years they have too (they imply that the little one its in the university so shes over 30 or so). I really like to take care of the details despite all the narrative so you need to not trow so many plot twists over and over but i don't want to sound so pushy with that...

Something more to add, check the volumes and how the songs in loop play sometimes the sound were really high and someone with headphones its quite a lot and when some musics were played there was a little silent and then the loop was played so you need to fix this too aside of that i love your selection in creating that LoRA was really sweet and cute as the other dude my boner was killed but my heart feels whole..

I will be keeping in touch with you and if you like to know more about a reviewer like me i can talk to you in discord if you like!.

Hope to see more of you.

Somnialamment.

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