LOVED the focus on ballbusting, very good job teasing, and encouraging us along while we do it harder. You might get wavering opinions considering your style is very different but I think this is a fantastic start for your first video. Hope you do become well know, excited for more and hope u continue with Ballbusting and cbt :)
Also it doesn't bother me personally but I know people are iffy on music with lyrics being in JOI's. Music is fine but the lyrics can throw people off. Up to you though really
That was amazing especially the humiliation towards the end was so good. Real humiliation that hits home not that soft boring stuff. Looking forward to seeing your new videos
Overall this was good for your first joi. Some feedback:
Change your music, just use some instrumental type music.
Don't add pig pics, throws u off whilst jerking lol💀
I would make the captions abit easier on the eye, so make then less blurred yk?
Some of the pics were abit blurred, it would probably be better if u didn't try doing it in that background and followed normal joi form, where u just put the girls pics and dialogue.
Lastly, this is an excellent opportunity to expand on, u have set the groundwork. U have made me(viewer) Mikasas bitch for life, so now u can expand on this. You mentioned that mikasas ass is only for real men, great opportunity to introduce ntr for future.
U should add feet and shoes
Lastly May I request a Fubuki (OPM) ntr sph humiliation joi and also same theme joi for Yuki (jjk)
Thx
Thanks for this JOI, I will be Mikasa's bitch from this day on.
I love hitting my balls, it's my favorite CBT task.
As others have said before me, it would be even better if the text was less blured.
I had a lot of fun watching it and loved obeying Mikasa!
I hope this is the start of a long series.
aotjoi
11 months ago
Criticisms and critiques are greatly appreciated, I will become the most well known aot joi maker on this site
DesireJoi
11 months ago
I am confused
somebody
11 months ago
hey can I request a private video? please give me your discord link
aotjoi
11 months ago
no but thanks for asking
Variety
11 months ago
LOVED the focus on ballbusting, very good job teasing, and encouraging us along while we do it harder. You might get wavering opinions considering your style is very different but I think this is a fantastic start for your first video. Hope you do become well know, excited for more and hope u continue with Ballbusting and cbt :)
Variety
11 months ago
Also it doesn't bother me personally but I know people are iffy on music with lyrics being in JOI's. Music is fine but the lyrics can throw people off. Up to you though really
Heroin
11 months ago
That was amazing especially the humiliation towards the end was so good. Real humiliation that hits home not that soft boring stuff. Looking forward to seeing your new videos
ThatOne
11 months ago
Overall this was good for your first joi. Some feedback:
Change your music, just use some instrumental type music.
Don't add pig pics, throws u off whilst jerking lol💀
I would make the captions abit easier on the eye, so make then less blurred yk?
Some of the pics were abit blurred, it would probably be better if u didn't try doing it in that background and followed normal joi form, where u just put the girls pics and dialogue.
Lastly, this is an excellent opportunity to expand on, u have set the groundwork. U have made me(viewer) Mikasas bitch for life, so now u can expand on this. You mentioned that mikasas ass is only for real men, great opportunity to introduce ntr for future.
U should add feet and shoes
Lastly May I request a Fubuki (OPM) ntr sph humiliation joi and also same theme joi for Yuki (jjk)
Thx
ThatOne
11 months ago
Personally I would want blacked cuckold jois but upto u lol💀😂
1234567890ab
11 months ago
It's perfect
llord2524
11 months ago
Thanks for this JOI, I will be Mikasa's bitch from this day on.
I love hitting my balls, it's my favorite CBT task.
As others have said before me, it would be even better if the text was less blured.
I had a lot of fun watching it and loved obeying Mikasa!
I hope this is the start of a long series.
Wolff12345
2 months ago
Loved the JOI, great story!